My P.S. for Lower T14-T30 - Feedback Appreciated :-) Forum
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Gc12
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My P.S. for Lower T14-T30 - Feedback Appreciated :-)
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gambelda
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Re: My P.S. for Lower T14-T30 - Feedback Appreciated :-)
I understand the theme of talking and listening. I do like this theme and would encourage you to keep it. Especially with how it relates to you wanting to go to law school. What I don't understand is what value you think the story about your friend with the crips add. It seemes like there is 1-2 very brief stories/setences that make it appear as though you're jumping around with ideas instead of building upon the theme you lay out.
Just my 2 cents but maybe you shouldn't trust me....I do get -7 in Reading Comp
Also, if you have time within your busy schedule and law school stuff, I'd love to chat about your movie/screenplay experiences via PM/phone or whathaveyou. I am filming an independent movie in June with 2 friends from college and if it goes well, it is an life avenue that I think I would greatly enjoy pursuing.
Just my 2 cents but maybe you shouldn't trust me....I do get -7 in Reading Comp
Also, if you have time within your busy schedule and law school stuff, I'd love to chat about your movie/screenplay experiences via PM/phone or whathaveyou. I am filming an independent movie in June with 2 friends from college and if it goes well, it is an life avenue that I think I would greatly enjoy pursuing.
