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Postby PinkCow » Sun Nov 14, 2010 1:48 am

Thanks for comments!
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Re: OMG OMG OMG OMG ANOTHER PS!!!!

Postby PinkCow » Sun Nov 14, 2010 4:20 am

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Re: OMG OMG OMG OMG ANOTHER PS!!!!

Postby orangebluewhitered » Sun Nov 14, 2010 4:48 am

Some of the language is overcomplicated to the point of being ungrammatical. And some of the training details are just boring. But more importantly I don't really get to know you very well after having read the essay.

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Re: OMG OMG OMG OMG ANOTHER PS!!!!

Postby jasonc. » Sun Nov 14, 2010 4:50 am

This needs alot of work. I like that is shows your determination,but it is to detailed and to repetitive. What's the point of mentioning swimming.?when it's about running

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Re: OMG OMG OMG OMG ANOTHER PS!!!!

Postby PinkCow » Sun Nov 14, 2010 5:33 pm

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Re: OMG OMG OMG OMG ANOTHER PS!!!!

Postby HowdyYall » Sun Nov 14, 2010 5:37 pm

chip3341 wrote:Thanks for the comments guys. Anybody else? I'd really like to be able to submit for some schools tonight, but if this is just horrible then I'll have to rethink...


i know how you feel trying to get all your apps in early and everything but give it another week of editing. You will still be submitting early if you apply before thanksgiving!




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