First DRAFT! I NEED HELP!!

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First DRAFT! I NEED HELP!!

Postby glitched » Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:51 am

Edit: working on second draft. Pm if interested in swapping
Last edited by glitched on Sun Nov 14, 2010 3:44 pm, edited 11 times in total.

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Re: First DRAFT! I NEED HELP!!

Postby 3|ink » Sun Nov 14, 2010 1:21 am

I think someone has already made your movie:

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And WB is making it into a live-action in 2011.

That aside, your essay is certainly revealing. At least we know your motives for going to law school. However, it comes off like 'I'm only an amateur movie maker, I may never become a director so I'll pick law as my safety career.'

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Re: First DRAFT! I NEED HELP!!

Postby glitched » Sun Nov 14, 2010 7:22 am

done - i tried to fix that problem? is that deathnote? haha ive never read it but i heard its cool.

thanks for the reply. :)




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