Please help get rid of my semi-colons.

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McNulty
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Please help get rid of my semi-colons.

Postby McNulty » Thu Nov 11, 2010 4:17 am

thanks!
Last edited by McNulty on Fri Nov 12, 2010 2:39 am, edited 1 time in total.

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ShuckingNotJiving
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Re: Please help get rid of my semi-colons.

Postby ShuckingNotJiving » Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:38 am

obv i'm not going to go through the entire thing, but,


McNulty wrote:Throughout most of my life music has been an all-encompassing passion—an artistic release that is not a primary focus, but a trusted companion; a shoulder to lean on when I desired validation; a community of friends who were fans of a similar sound.


this sentence shows that you don't know how to use semi-colons correctly.

Consult a reliable edu website that has info on grammar. there are many.

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Fresh
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Re: Please help get rid of my semi-colons.

Postby Fresh » Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:41 am

ShuckingNotJiving wrote:obv i'm not going to go through the entire thing, but,


McNulty wrote:Throughout most of my life music has been an all-encompassing passion—an artistic release that is not a primary focus, but a trusted companion; a shoulder to lean on when I desired validation; a community of friends who were fans of a similar sound.


this sentence shows that you don't know how to use semi-colons correctly.

Consult a reliable edu website that has info on grammar. there are many.


Holy semi-colons lol.
zero semi-colons in your ps = :(
one semi-colon in your ps = 8)
> 1 semi-colon in your ps = :roll:




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