1st Draft, need help! Please :)

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1st Draft, need help! Please :)

Postby fannntastic » Wed Nov 10, 2010 5:13 pm

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Re: 1st Draft, need help! Please :)

Postby Flips88 » Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:22 pm

Nix the Legally Blonde intro. It sounds pretty cliche and uninteresting. You are very unspecific about hardships in your life. You need some specific example. I think you have some good stuff, but you need to focus it. Maybe discuss some specifically rewarding performances with the theater group.

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