Fill in the blank! Grammar help please

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padthai
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Fill in the blank! Grammar help please

Postby padthai » Mon Nov 01, 2010 8:30 pm

thanks!!
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Ragged
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Re: Fill in the blank! Grammar help please

Postby Ragged » Mon Nov 01, 2010 8:31 pm

padthai wrote:Since you people are so helpful.

"Although we understood the company's concern ___ the possibility of profit undercutting, .... blabla"

Fill in the blank! Over? With?


"...with the possibility of undercutting profit, "

would be better I think.

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MrKappus
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Re: Fill in the blank! Grammar help please

Postby MrKappus » Mon Nov 01, 2010 8:35 pm

I'd go w/ "concerns about profit undercutting." Less is more when it comes to syllables.

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Re: Fill in the blank! Grammar help please

Postby padthai » Mon Nov 01, 2010 8:39 pm

YES!!! Perfect. Thank you!




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