Can someone help me with this sentence?

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AUC2MIC
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Can someone help me with this sentence?

Postby AUC2MIC » Tue Oct 26, 2010 5:54 pm

Is this grammatically acceptable?

"We were in the ____ room at _____ hospital WHERE I was two months into my patient care rotation."

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Re: Can someone help me with this sentence?

Postby philosoraptor » Tue Oct 26, 2010 6:03 pm

AUC2MIC wrote:Is this grammatically acceptable?

"We were in the ____ room at _____ hospital WHERE I was two months into my patient care rotation."
Depends on what the second blank is. If it's "the," then yes, you're OK. If it's the name of the hospital, you'll likely need to capitalize "hospital" and precede "where" with a comma" (assuming it's the only hospital of that name).

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Re: Can someone help me with this sentence?

Postby AUC2MIC » Tue Oct 26, 2010 6:08 pm

philosoraptor wrote:
AUC2MIC wrote:Is this grammatically acceptable?

"We were in the ____ room at _____ hospital WHERE I was two months into my patient care rotation."
Depends on what the second blank is. If it's "the," then yes, you're OK. If it's the name of the hospital, you'll likely need to capitalize "hospital" and precede "where" with a comma" (assuming it's the only hospital of that name).


Awesome, thanks

It is indeed "We were in the ____ room at the [name] Hospital"




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