Quick help needed for a sentence

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Steppinchoi
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Quick help needed for a sentence

Postby Steppinchoi » Tue Oct 26, 2010 2:43 pm

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Thanks for the help everyone :D
Last edited by Steppinchoi on Tue Oct 26, 2010 3:26 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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mteevin
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Re: Quick help needed for a sentence

Postby mteevin » Tue Oct 26, 2010 2:47 pm

A semicolon would not be appropriate, as the second clause of your sentence cannot stand independently. A simple comma would probably be better than a colon.

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PinkCow
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Re: Quick help needed for a sentence

Postby PinkCow » Tue Oct 26, 2010 2:54 pm

Second the comma choice. A "-" would be fine as well.

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Re: Quick help needed for a sentence

Postby NonTradHealthLaw » Tue Oct 26, 2010 2:55 pm

Em dash all the way

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Re: Quick help needed for a sentence

Postby 2807 » Tue Oct 26, 2010 3:07 pm

Edit. Good luck to you!




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