Would someone be kind enough to read my PS & DS?

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sankara
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Would someone be kind enough to read my PS & DS?

Postby sankara » Mon Oct 25, 2010 8:14 pm

I have completed both my PS and DS. I would really appreciate a good read from some of the experienced posters/past cycle applicants on the forum. I would prefer to PM both so please let me know if you would be willing.

Thanks!

tourdeforcex
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Re: Would someone be kind enough to read my PS & DS?

Postby tourdeforcex » Tue Oct 26, 2010 9:05 am

feel free to PM. also indicate how critical you prefer me to be on a scale of 1 to 7.

sankara
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Re: Would someone be kind enough to read my PS & DS?

Postby sankara » Tue Oct 26, 2010 7:16 pm

Finished another round of revision. I think it's a good read. I touched on diversity but I want to make sure it was not overwhelming. Additionally, I was advised by a prelaw adviser to make no remote references to my lackluster GPA. However, referencing this in my first paragraph ties into my message of triumph. I am hoping for a good of this before turning it over to the adviser to read.

sankara
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Re: Would someone be kind enough to read my PS & DS?

Postby sankara » Tue Oct 26, 2010 8:15 pm

tourdeforcex wrote:feel free to PM. also indicate how critical you prefer me to be on a scale of 1 to 7.

Hey! Thanks. I shot you a PM. Anybody else? You would really be helping me out. Trying to get these apps out by next week.

sankara
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Re: Would someone be kind enough to read my PS & DS?

Postby sankara » Thu Oct 28, 2010 12:54 pm

i've had some great feedback thus far. interested in swapping statements with anyone who is in the latter/finished stages of both statements.

deathviaboredom
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Re: Would someone be kind enough to read my PS & DS?

Postby deathviaboredom » Thu Oct 28, 2010 12:57 pm

I have a couple of statements in the later stages. Swap?

sankara
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Re: Would someone be kind enough to read my PS & DS?

Postby sankara » Thu Oct 28, 2010 4:10 pm

deathviaboredom wrote:I have a couple of statements in the later stages. Swap?


sounds good.




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