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This is amazing. Have you ever seen the movie "Homeless to Harvard?" It can probably be about you . No, but really, I liked the last paragraph especially. It helps present you in a way that shows your appreciation for your past experiences and not your disdain. It is a very powerful statement and one I am sure adcomms will love. Good luck!
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nataliejane38 wrote:Going to law school in order to become a lawyer will fulfill my dedication to public interest law and to serving the underprivileged and underrepresented population whose experiences I am in a unique position to relate to.
Doesn't sound quite right to me ... might want to consider rephrasing the last bit of it.
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Thanks so much for the feedback. I'll have to check out Homeless to Harvard, I've never heard of it. And I think I will try and revise that last sentence, I struggled with it a little bit and it's still not quite right. Thanks!
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