please read mine and critique it--i will love you forever!

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ck3ku
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please read mine and critique it--i will love you forever!

Postby ck3ku » Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:03 pm

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CanadianWolf
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Re: please read mine and critique it--i will love you forever!

Postby CanadianWolf » Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:09 pm

This is a very moving & convincing essay that should make a very positive impact upon the reader. Maybe I need to reread your personal statement, but the Holocaust survivor references don't really make the impact or connection that you intend.




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