PS Topic: sports betting, critique needed

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glacierfrost
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PS Topic: sports betting, critique needed

Postby glacierfrost » Tue Sep 28, 2010 4:07 am

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Last edited by glacierfrost on Fri Oct 08, 2010 9:49 pm, edited 1 time in total.

glacierfrost
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Re: PS Topic: sports betting, critique needed

Postby glacierfrost » Fri Oct 01, 2010 3:57 am

Bump, can someone please take a look and let me know what they think? A simple YES or NO or a 1-10 rating will be greatly appreciated :lol:

Also, I am down to edit and give feedback on your essay so feel free to send it to me as well.

CanadianWolf
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Re: PS Topic: sports betting, critique needed

Postby CanadianWolf » Fri Oct 01, 2010 12:00 pm

Not good. Seems more appropriate for an application to business school than one to law schools. Somewhat boring due to too many unnecessary details. This is an example of poor writing because it contains every single detail in order to communicate a very simple message. On a scale of 1 to 10 in which 10 is excellent, this is a 2 for those who read the entire essay & a 3 for those granted clemency halfway through.

glacierfrost
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Re: PS Topic: sports betting, critique needed

Postby glacierfrost » Fri Oct 08, 2010 9:49 pm

Thanks for the input CW, I see what you're talking about.




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