If you wanted to, in this section:
Instead, I have found ways to utilize my situation to inspire both myself and others. I have given speeches on behalf of the American Cancer Society at local high schools to raise money and spread the awareness of cancer......... More than ever, I now strive to succeed and achieve my goals, and more importantly, I now have complete faith in myself to do so.
You could add in something about how it inspired you to put more work into classes, research, or something related because you wanted to develop yourself and your skills that way as well -- assuming that is true.
I mean, this experience helped drive you to spend 3 more years in school, right? And if you have complete faith in yourself to achieve this goal, you could legitimately add in a sentence about how it inspired you academically as well as compassionately and created a passion to learn about ___ law.
Just a couple thoughts.
Feel free to ignore them. As I said before, I like it as it is now, but if you want to add a small academic touch, those kind of things could work.
ETA: I wouldn't necessarily use the wording "it created a passion" in the PS, lol.