Anyone willing to critique/read my PS? Forum

[kenpowers3]

Hey I'm on my 2nd draft here and was wondering if anyone would take a look at it? I would prefer to send it as a pm. Any help would be much appreciated but if someone has a great deal of experience regarding admission essays, grammar or personal statements in general your expertise would be unbelievably appreciated. And of course I will gladly take a look at anyone else's personal statement, whether you feel equipped to critique mine or not.

[kenpowers3]

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[thesybarite]

Happy to have a look...but have none of the required experience. Sometimes an extra pair of eyes can help though?

Clarity is best found fresh

[leggy1T1]

I've edited a few personal statements now... be happy to take a look if you PM it to me.

[homestyle28]

I've edited a few personal statements now... be happy to take a look if you PM it to me.

ditto