Very Rough PS... Please help!!

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florentine
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Very Rough PS... Please help!!

Postby florentine » Tue Aug 31, 2010 7:40 pm

Thanks for the help guys I'm feeling better.
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El_Gallo
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Re: Very Rough PS... Please help!!

Postby El_Gallo » Tue Aug 31, 2010 7:56 pm

I just browsed it, but it seemed to be well written. If this is just a rough draft I am sure the final draft will be excellent.

My only advice would be tie it in a little bit more. I am not one of those people that thinks you have to go through a near death experience to write a good PS, but in this case, it would definitely help more if you emphasized the correlation between you studying abroad and developing the desire to go to law school. I know you talk about how it made you step outside your bubble and all that, but what exactly about it makes you want to go to law school?

I think you are a great writer though. Good luck!

florentine
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Re: Very Rough PS... Please help!!

Postby florentine » Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:01 pm

Wow! Thank you so much! That really quells some of my fears about my PS! I will definitely look and see where I can tie that in as that is a very good idea. Thank you so much again for looking at it as I was getting worried about it...




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