Military Personal Statement

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JDLaf
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Military Personal Statement

Postby JDLaf » Thu Aug 26, 2010 2:16 am

All,
Can someone (or numerous people) please edit and comment on my personal statement? I have been out of school for about 5 years now and am heavily relying on an excellent PS relaying some of my military experiences to present myself as someone who can bring a certain type of diversity to a law school. Let me know if you are willing to help and I'll send you my PS in a private message.
Thanks!!

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JDLaf
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Re: Military Personal Statement

Postby JDLaf » Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:11 am

Please??
haha.

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Re: Military Personal Statement

Postby CyLaw » Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:32 am

You can PM it to me. I'm a 1L at Cornell and based my PS on my military experience also.

Some warnings:
I am not the best at grammar, so I can't really help much there.
I should have some time to review it this weekend, but I can't promise to get back to you anytime before this Monday.

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Re: Military Personal Statement

Postby JDLaf » Fri Aug 27, 2010 11:59 am

Thanks. I'll have a revised copy based on some initial comments from another helpful member. Standby...

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Re: Military Personal Statement

Postby paratactical » Fri Aug 27, 2010 12:11 pm

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Last edited by paratactical on Wed Feb 13, 2013 11:06 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: Military Personal Statement

Postby JDLaf » Sat Aug 28, 2010 6:12 am

I am working a revision but would definitely like for you to look it over. Hopefully I'll have it done in the next day or 2...




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