A Splitter's PS

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Marionberry
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A Splitter's PS

Postby Marionberry » Tue Aug 17, 2010 11:40 am

Anyone want to read my PS? It doesn't actually have anything to do with the fact that I'm a splitter, but it needs to be extra good to compensate for my crapfest of a GPA. I'll swap or whatever, I just don't want to post it on here because I'm unreasonably paranoid. It's not crazy or anything, though.

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Re: A Splitter's PS

Postby Knock » Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:33 pm

Marionberry wrote:Anyone want to read my PS? It doesn't actually have anything to do with the fact that I'm a splitter, but it needs to be extra good to compensate for my crapfest of a GPA. I'll swap or whatever, I just don't want to post it on here because I'm unreasonably paranoid. It's not crazy or anything, though.


I'll attest that it is a good PS :mrgreen:. Have you changed it much since I last read it?

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Re: A Splitter's PS

Postby Marionberry » Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:36 pm

Not really. I don't think that there's much more I can do at this point, but I'm open to any suggestions that might just completely blow my mind and make it that much better. Advice of this nature is welcome :D .

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Re: A Splitter's PS

Postby Knock » Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:37 pm

Marionberry wrote:Not really. I don't think that there's much more I can do at this point, but I'm open to any suggestions that might just completely blow my mind and make it that much better. Advice of this nature is welcome :D .


Haha, I second that request :P. I'd pm Billyez and Canadianwolf, they are some of the regulars in the PS forum and helped me out a lot.

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Re: A Splitter's PS

Postby username99 » Wed Aug 18, 2010 3:55 pm

I'll take a look

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Re: A Splitter's PS

Postby ArchRoark » Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:16 pm

I'll take a look, but I am only feel comfortable speaking to the content/thematic elements rather then grammatical issues.

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Re: A Splitter's PS

Postby mcnabb5 » Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:25 pm

i'll take a look as well




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