I would appreciate any help in reviewing my first draft

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lakerfanimal
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I would appreciate any help in reviewing my first draft

Postby lakerfanimal » Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:41 pm

PM me if you could help me out. It's really long right now, and it's extremely rough, I'm just looking for some feedback on what I should cut-out and how I can condense things.

Thanks a bunch!

Total Litigator
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Re: I would appreciate any help in reviewing my first draft

Postby Total Litigator » Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:45 pm

the best way to do this is to just post your PS.

I really really doubt anyone is going to PM you.

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billyez
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Re: I would appreciate any help in reviewing my first draft

Postby billyez » Thu Jul 29, 2010 1:56 pm

The above actually isn't true. There's been more than a few threads where this has been the method to get a review and it works fine. That being said, unless there's something you really don't want others to know about that's in the context of your PS, I would just post it. It'll increase the likelihood of getting reviews.

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bk1
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Re: I would appreciate any help in reviewing my first draft

Postby bk1 » Thu Jul 29, 2010 2:04 pm

I'll take a PM of it.

Actually I've found that posting it doesn't necessarily increase reviews, it really depends on how much free time the people who like to review have and whether they feel like reviewing it when you make your post. But it will probably increase the chances.

lakerfanimal
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Re: I would appreciate any help in reviewing my first draft

Postby lakerfanimal » Thu Jul 29, 2010 2:28 pm

Thanks for the feedback guys. It's just reallly long right now, so I want to get a couple people's advice on where I should shorten it up, and then I might post it after that when I feel like it actually fits the proper length. I'll pm you bk, thanks a bunch!

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brochocinco
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Re: I would appreciate any help in reviewing my first draft

Postby brochocinco » Thu Jul 29, 2010 2:32 pm

I'll take a PM too if you're willing to read mine as well. It's extremely rough but need to start somewhere.




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