Diversity statement first draft - critique needed!

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xqhp82
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Diversity statement first draft - critique needed!

Postby xqhp82 » Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:30 pm

hi, i have just finished a very rough draft of my DS, would like some serious critique from you guys, especially on how to cut it short (it's almost 3 pages double spaced now) and specific comments on content. anyone interested i will PM my DS to you as I don't want to post it here. thanks!!

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hypothalamus
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Re: Diversity statement first draft - critique needed!

Postby hypothalamus » Sun Jul 04, 2010 11:47 am

Send it my way - I'd be happy to help. But you should know I'm a merciless editor : ).

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Re: Diversity statement first draft - critique needed!

Postby CanadianWolf » Sun Jul 04, 2010 11:49 am

I'll read & critique your essay if you PM it to me.

xqhp82
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Re: Diversity statement first draft - critique needed!

Postby xqhp82 » Tue Jul 06, 2010 1:24 am

thanks both of you. any more takers?? would like to hear comments from different perspectives

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Re: Diversity statement first draft - critique needed!

Postby sikwitt » Tue Jul 06, 2010 5:33 am

I'll take a look. PM me




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