First Draft of a PS

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scoobysnax
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Re: First Draft of a PS

Postby scoobysnax » Wed Jun 11, 2014 12:43 pm

Break up your sentence structures. Add some short sentences so it's not just a compilation of super long sentences with 2+ commas- it makes your essay more monotonous.

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Re: First Draft of a PS

Postby McAvoy » Wed Jun 11, 2014 12:55 pm

scoobysnax wrote:Break up your sentence structures. Add some short sentences so it's not just a compilation of super long sentences with 2+ commas- it makes your essay more monotonous.

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