Someone please critique my 'Why ND' essay!!

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motedust
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Someone please critique my 'Why ND' essay!!

Postby motedust » Tue Apr 13, 2010 3:11 pm

In undergrad, 3.0/168.
Christian school.
Bi-racial (asian/white) born internationally
Recently waitlisted.

I had not written a 'Why ND' yet and being waitlisted I believe now would be the opportune time to send one, the first seat deposit being due in about a week. Please let me know if you would like to edit my essay and I will PM. Thanks!

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Re: Someone please critique my 'Why ND' essay!!

Postby OmbreGracieuse » Wed Apr 14, 2010 8:51 pm

motedust wrote:In undergrad, 3.0/168.
Christian school.
Bi-racial (asian/white) born internationally
Recently waitlisted.

I had not written a 'Why ND' yet and being waitlisted I believe now would be the opportune time to send one, the first seat deposit being due in about a week. Please let me know if you would like to edit my essay and I will PM. Thanks!


I live about 4 blocks from ND and go to one of the local schools for my UG. I'd be happy to look it over for you. :)




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