Risky P.S., Looking for critique/trade via P.M

[CMDantes]

Hey all,

I posted my P.S. on here a while ago but have changed it substantially. It's basically new.

It begins in a risky way, describing a moment in my life where I was on the verge of starting up a small 'urban pharmaceuticals' business.

If you're interested, please post and I'll shoot over my P.S.

I'm not afraid to hear brutal commentary, in fact I welcome it (looking at you, justdude)

Thanks.

[stripedbanana10]

I'll take a look. Pm me.

[quickquestionthanks]

Shoot it over. PM

[OmbreGracieuse]

I would be happy to look at it if you still need help.

[hellokitty]

Bump.

I haven't written it yet, as I am totally changing my application for the 2010-2011 cycle, and I'd like to know if my topic is inappropriate or too risky or might make me look bad to adcomms. If you're willing to give me an honest opinion, I'd love to hear it. PM me for the topic.

Thanks.