anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)

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jtoppe2
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anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)

Postby jtoppe2 » Wed Feb 24, 2010 1:55 pm

if so, send me a personal message or email me. my email is jtoppe2@gmail.com.

i really need somebody who can be objective. it seems that my parents, friends and girlfriend have lost that 'objective' quality. thanks!

NewtonLied
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Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)

Postby NewtonLied » Thu Feb 25, 2010 10:04 pm

Is your girlfriend hot?

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JustDude
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Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)

Postby JustDude » Fri Feb 26, 2010 1:40 am

NewtonLied wrote:Is your girlfriend hot?


Not appropriate man!!!!!



OP: Is your mom MILF?

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Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)

Postby PigNipple » Fri Feb 26, 2010 1:42 am

JustDude wrote:
NewtonLied wrote:Is your girlfriend hot?


Not appropriate man!!!!!



OP: Is your mom MILF?


Hey, hey, hey guys! What about your dad?

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Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)

Postby JustDude » Fri Feb 26, 2010 1:43 am

PigNipple wrote:
JustDude wrote:
NewtonLied wrote:Is your girlfriend hot?


Not appropriate man!!!!!



OP: Is your mom MILF?


Hey, hey, hey guys! What about your dad?


You think he is DILF?

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Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)

Postby PigNipple » Fri Feb 26, 2010 1:45 am

JustDude wrote:
PigNipple wrote:
JustDude wrote:
NewtonLied wrote:Is your girlfriend hot?


Not appropriate man!!!!!



OP: Is your mom MILF?


Hey, hey, hey guys! What about your dad?


You think he is DILF?


:twisted:

jtoppe2
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Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)

Postby jtoppe2 » Fri Feb 26, 2010 2:47 pm

yeah, my girlfriend is hot, but my mom is fat. and my dad, i've been told he's a DILF.

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Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)

Postby NewtonLied » Fri Feb 26, 2010 3:32 pm

jtoppe2 wrote:yeah, my girlfriend is hot, but my mom is fat. and my dad, i've been told he's a DILF.


Well... that took a turn for the unexpected...

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Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)

Postby jtoppe2 » Fri Feb 26, 2010 3:37 pm

indeed, it did.

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Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)

Postby JustDude » Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:13 am

jtoppe2 wrote:indeed, it did.


I feel like we highjacked you tread.


That was unintentioal and we are sorry.


About your PS. Did you show it to your other relatives/friends??? Are they hot by any chance?




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