PS screaming for help, and begging to be ripped apart

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artexprt
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PS screaming for help, and begging to be ripped apart

Postby artexprt » Tue Jan 26, 2010 5:01 pm

In fact it's probably screaming so loud you can hear it through your computer's speakers.
I've got at 3.69/166, looking at mostly 20-40 ranked schools.
Any advice is appreciated.
PM me if you want to help. New draft in progress.
Last edited by artexprt on Wed Jan 27, 2010 12:13 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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cherryalamode
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Re: PS screaming for help, and begging to be ripped apart

Postby cherryalamode » Tue Jan 26, 2010 5:07 pm

Personally I think it's good technically.

On the other hand, it gets a bit dry and maybe a bit TOO technical.

The family thing was an unnecessary sentence as it has nothing to do with the rest of your essay. I would also suggest to flesh out your Museum experience a little more because it is your chosen career path.

However, I found this PS REALLY interesting as I actually have the exact same interest in law school as you. :) And when I say exact, I am being literal: looking for a way to mesh IP and Museum/Art into a career...

Good Luck to you!




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