Two addendums for you to proof read!

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Captain Muscles
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Two addendums for you to proof read!

Postby Captain Muscles » Thu Jan 21, 2010 6:45 am

Addendum for increase in LSAT score.



Dear Law School Admission Committee:

I scored a 161 on the December 2009 LSAT, 8 points higher than the 153 I scored on the February 2009 LSAT. The reason for this discrepancy is that I was much better prepared for the Logic Games section of the December 2009 LSAT.

In preparation for the December 2009 LSAT, I purchased the LSAT Logic Games Bible by Powerscore and the book helped me develop an effective strategy for completing the Logic Games section of the LSAT.

I believe my December 2009 score is a better indicator for my potential to succeed in Law School and I would appreciate it if you disregard my February 2009 score in evaluating my application.


Best Regards,

Captain Muscles


Here is the next one.


Addendum for disclosure.

Attention Law School Admission Committee:

There have been two court cases that should be disclosed.
I failed to appear in court for:
1. 01/07/06 Received ticket for No Proof of current registration in the car.
2.10/27/07 Received traffic ticket for failure to dim headlights.

Both cases were resolved on 11/18/08 at the ******* Courthouse, Traffic Division.
Fee paid $701.00

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maximus32
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Re: Two addendums for you to proof read!

Postby maximus32 » Thu Jan 21, 2010 7:32 am

I wouldn't delve into the reasons behind the LSAT jump. Honestly, I don't know if you even need to write an addendum for the jump, but if you do just say something to the effect "I wasn't prepared, yada yada yada...."

Just my 2 cents...

SoCalKevin
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Re: Two addendums for you to proof read!

Postby SoCalKevin » Thu Jan 21, 2010 5:08 pm

What's the point of asking for an addendum for a higher LSAT score? I imagine 99% of the answers will be about the same.

Captain Muscles
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Re: Two addendums for you to proof read!

Postby Captain Muscles » Thu Jan 21, 2010 5:18 pm

The reason I am submitting the addendum is because they specifically asked for it.

By the way, does my disclosure addendum look ok?
Last edited by Captain Muscles on Thu Jan 21, 2010 5:38 pm, edited 1 time in total.

SoCalKevin
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Re: Two addendums for you to proof read!

Postby SoCalKevin » Thu Jan 21, 2010 5:27 pm

Captain Muscles wrote:The reason I a submitting the addendum is because they specifically asked for it.

By the way, does my disclosure addendum look ok?



I know- sorry, bad wording on that post. I meant why do the adcomms bother.




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