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Overall I was confused about your experience in private school. Some parts of your essay make it sound like it was in impediment and some parts make it sound like you were at an advantage b/c of your private school education. I would work to improve your introduction, the contrast of the things mentioned doesn't seem very strong. Also, isn't algebra and geometry required? I know it was when I was in high school but that was back in the early 90's. lol Try to reorganize your essay and work on flow.
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