Please savage my PS

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personi
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Please savage my PS

Postby personi » Wed Jan 06, 2010 1:04 am

-Edited out PS- Thanks for the help!
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Re: Please savage my PS

Postby personi » Wed Jan 06, 2010 9:23 pm

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Re: Please savage my PS

Postby personi » Thu Jan 07, 2010 2:09 pm

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Re: Please savage my PS

Postby nycparalegal » Thu Jan 07, 2010 2:14 pm

With the help of the attorney, my father and I became citizens while I was in high school, and my mother is on her way to citizenship as well.


What do you mean by this sentence?

When did your mother become a citizen? Was it while you were in high school?
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Re: Please savage my PS

Postby pamplemousse » Thu Jan 07, 2010 2:43 pm

check you inbox :)

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Re: Please savage my PS

Postby personi » Thu Jan 07, 2010 3:13 pm

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Re: Please savage my PS

Postby personi » Thu Jan 07, 2010 3:13 pm

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Re: Please savage my PS

Postby MC Southstar » Thu Jan 07, 2010 3:13 pm

personi wrote:
jayzon wrote:I take offense to the use of the word "savage."


Would ravage have been more appropriate? :D


Damn it, you beat me to it.




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