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[strike]I see many more similarities than differences between practicing law and delivering Meals on Wheels. While a lawyer is receiving money in return, they are providing an essential service that the client could not accomplish his/her goals without.[/strike]
I would not right that. ^
The very general idea seems to be that doing charity work made you like helping people and when you are a lawyer you will be able to keep helping them. No need to draw specific parrelels - that sounds a bit childish IMO.
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While I feel that adcomms always appreciate brevity and being concise, this is a bit too short.
The first paragraph is a good start, and a few of the other sentences would provide good topic sentences for a more flushed-out version of what you have.
If you're looking for a whole new topic, U Cincinnati suggested an interesting topic choice. They mentioned writing about a historical figure, specific book/character, etc. that inspired or had a significant impact on you. It seems like that is a topic that could lead to a compelling and unique PS. Something to think about I suppose.
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