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alkaseltzerx
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Diversity Statement Revised
Moved to PS section.
Last edited by alkaseltzerx on Wed Aug 05, 2015 11:47 pm, edited 18 times in total.
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shump92
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Re: Diversity Statement
Too long, too descriptive, and too much exposition. I lost my interest a couple of paragraphs in and didn't want to keep going. Start was honestly just odd. A diversity statement doesn't need to be like metafiction and acknowledge itself. Make the story your only focus. Really should only have 1 double spaced page for this. Make the beginning for interesting and everything should be very specific to you.
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CanadianWolf
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Re: Diversity Statement
Very well written. I couldn't stop reading. You took me into your world.
