Need help with my DS

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amc987
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Need help with my DS

Postby amc987 » Sat Oct 08, 2011 1:41 pm

Hey all,

I am struggling to cut down and perfect my diversity statement before I submit it. Would anyone be willing to read it and give me tips about things i could truncate and improve??

I would really appreciate it!! PM me for details. I'm a little leery of posting the whole thing in a publicly accessible forum...

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Re: Need help with my DS

Postby Blessedassurance » Sat Oct 08, 2011 8:21 pm

amc987 wrote:Hey all,

I am struggling to cut down and perfect my diversity statement before I submit it. Would anyone be willing to read it and give me tips about things i could truncate and improve??

I would really appreciate it!! PM me for details. I'm a little leery of posting the whole thing in a publicly accessible forum...


How long is it?

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Re: Need help with my DS

Postby amc987 » Mon Oct 10, 2011 1:32 pm

About 3.5 pages. OK I posted it here. Any feedback ppl have would be really appreciated!!! I am looking to cut and perfect this before I submit it!

Thanks in advance, guys and girls.
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Re: Need help with my DS

Postby amc987 » Tue Oct 11, 2011 12:29 pm

Deleted. Will try to improve and repost.
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Re: Need help with my DS

Postby Justdoingmybest » Tue Oct 11, 2011 1:13 pm

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Re: Need help with my DS

Postby amc987 » Wed Oct 12, 2011 12:03 pm

Does anyone else have suggestions about how I could improve my DS??

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Re: Need help with my DS

Postby Blessedassurance » Thu Oct 13, 2011 3:33 am

Well, we can't see it.




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