Anyone willing to take a look at my diversity essay?

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Knock
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Anyone willing to take a look at my diversity essay?

Postby Knock » Mon May 24, 2010 3:56 pm

So i'm applying for a week-long summer program. I have to write a maximum of a 500 word essay on diversity. I finished a really rough draft, and I was wondering if someone wouldn't mind looking at it, and giving me some feedback, and pointing me in the direction I should take as I work towards the final draft.

Thank you.

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Re: Anyone willing to take a look at my diversity essay?

Postby MusicNutMeggie » Mon May 24, 2010 8:53 pm

I'd be happy to take a look, if you'd like. PM it to me?

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Re: Anyone willing to take a look at my diversity essay?

Postby trialjunky » Tue May 25, 2010 7:59 am

Feel free to PM me

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Re: Anyone willing to take a look at my diversity essay?

Postby Angelica Pickles » Mon Jun 07, 2010 8:01 pm

I'll take a look at it.

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Warren Harding
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Re: Anyone willing to take a look at my diversity essay?

Postby Warren Harding » Tue Jun 08, 2010 4:21 pm

PM me if you'd like.

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Re: Anyone willing to take a look at my diversity essay?

Postby trialjunky » Tue Jun 08, 2010 4:33 pm

This is from May 24th...let it go

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Knock
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Re: Anyone willing to take a look at my diversity essay?

Postby Knock » Tue Jun 08, 2010 4:35 pm

Actually it's still on the table...just had to take a long break from it due to the June LSAT.

It's due June 10th so I need to make significant re-writes and would appreciate if ppl could look at it at that point.

Thanks so much for reading it, MusicNutMeggie, your advice was really helpful!

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Re: Anyone willing to take a look at my diversity essay?

Postby MusicNutMeggie » Tue Jun 08, 2010 11:48 pm

Knockglock wrote:Actually it's still on the table...just had to take a long break from it due to the June LSAT.

It's due June 10th so I need to make significant re-writes and would appreciate if ppl could look at it at that point.

Thanks so much for reading it, MusicNutMeggie, your advice was really helpful!


Sure thing. Gooood luck!

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Knock
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Re: Anyone willing to take a look at my diversity essay?

Postby Knock » Wed Jun 09, 2010 5:15 pm

PM'd TrialJunky. Thank you so much! And thank you soooo much again MusicNutMeggie, I forgot to respond to your PM and I feel bad! especially since you gave me such great advice and criticism!




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