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I don't think it's too cheesy. Last line, though...

Yeah i was worried it might be a bit of an overkill, thanks though

(Almost) just right. Very perceptive and engaging. Except the line "I needed to reassure Sanchez that his dwarfism meant nothing to me, that we would be friends regardless of our physical differences." C'mon, it was the focus of why you reached out to him, it meant quite a lot more than nothing. ALso agree last line is bad. Other than that, this is a good ps.

ooo i see what you're saying, and i was definitely going to miss it otherwise. What i was going for was trying to show that i wanted to put on a show that made Sanchez feel warm and cuddly, even though i came across as condescending. i was trying to be too perfect, trying to act like his dwarfism really didn't mean anything to me even though it did. I guess with that sentence i didn't make that clear enough?

In FRONT of us?

I agree with the previous posts, but overall I think it is very well done.

oops, im gonna have to edit thing a 100 times to get all of those little mistakes out...but thanks for the help, these positive comments are doing wonders for my confidence